2008年11月9日星期日
porfolio 5
2008年11月2日星期日
portfolio 4
(i thought i had posted it but until today i found my portfolio 4 was "missing", maybe there was a technical problem....)
I have a lot of problems in writing. There are language problems, content problems and grammar problems. I think the most serious problems I have are the language problems. Since English is not my mother tongue, sometimes I cannot express what I’m thinking about correctly. When writing essays, I always write in English (of course) but think in Chinese. As a result, people often cannot understand what I’m saying if they do not know Chinese well. Moreover, sometimes even my Chinese friends find it difficult to understand my essays. One common language problem is the choice of words. Usually, if I want to express something but do not know the exact word, I will check with my dictionary. However, as most words have their specific use, sometimes I will choose a word which makes the whole sentence wired unconsciously. Another big language problem is the use of phrases. There are many similar phrases which have different meanings and must be use in different ways. For example, “on the contrary” and “in contrast”. I always mix them up.In my opinion, there are a few ways for me to improve. Firstly, I need to improve my vocabulary. As I have mentioned, I often have word choice problems. To avoid such problems, I must learn more new words and master how to use them. Secondly, I need to read more academic materials. I can benefit from others by familiarizing how they convey their ideas in the right way with the right words and phrases. Last but not least, I need to use English more. The more I use it, the more I will be familiar with it and express myself naturally.
2008年9月30日星期二
portfolio 3
Cyberspace is a newly formed system in late 20th century, but it poses many great challenges that engineers have ever met. Those challenges range from protection of privacy and completeness of the information to prevention of ID theft. Nowadays, Our daily life as well as military, economy and emergency services, more and more relies on the cyberspace. Any of these aspects of modern society can be easily influenced by cyberspace disruption. Till now, some important parts of cybersecurity have been protected well. However, ID theft and other cybercrimes are still serious problems and the cases of crime are increasing. Therefore, the security system should be improved as cybercrime becomes a serious problem for the Internet.
There are several ways to prevent malicious access to information and delivery of confidential messages.
The traditional way to protect computer is to install firewalls to prevent attacks. But the firewalls are not always workable and can be destroyed. Thus, engineers need to find new solutions. One better solution is to ask use relevant technologies to alternate both software and hardware of computers. For example the fingerprint security uses biometric technologies which requires instruments of scanning the fingerprint as well as the software to support the hardware. Another way to solve the problems is to develop better programming language which can increase the capacity of resistance of software to attacks.
After detecting problems, the process of fix and recovery is also important. What's more, chasing who are criminals may reduce to possibility of crimes in future.
Finally, a full-scale understanding of cyberspace problems should be emphasized since the problems may not be caused by individuals or organizations without any reasons. People are easily affected by surrounding social or cultural environment which may lead them to commit crimes.
Therefore, raising people’s understanding of psychology and sociology may help to reduce the rate of crime on cyberspace and law or regulations also should be strengthened by governments.
2008年9月17日星期三
grammar edit about punctuation
1. Omitted commas
Use commas to signal nonrestrictive or nonessential material, to prevent confusion, and to indicate relationships among ideas and sentence parts.
Original sentence: When it comes to eating people differ in their tastes.
Correction: When it comes to eating, people differ in their tastes.
Original sentence: The Huns who were Mongolian invaded Gaul in 451.
Correction: The Huns, who were Mongolian, invaded Gaul in 451.
["Who were Mongolian" adds information but does not change the core meaning of the sentence because Huns were a Mongolian people; this material is therefore nonrestrictive or nonessential.]
2.Superfluous commas
Unnecessary commas make sentences difficult to read.
Original sentence: Field trips are required, in several courses, such as, botany and geology.
correction: Field trips are required in several courses, such as botany and geology.
Original sentence: The term, "scientific illiteracy," has become almost a cliche, in educational circles.
Correction: The term "scientific illiteracy" has become almost a cliche in educational circles.
3. Comma splices
Do not link two independent clauses with a comma (unless you also use a coordinating conjunction: and, or, but, for, nor, so, yet). Instead use a period or semicolon, or rewrite the sentence.
Original sentence: In 1952 Japan‘s gross national product was one third that of France, by the late 1970s it was larger than the GNPs of France and Britain combined.
Correction: In 1952 Japan‘s gross national product was one third that of France. By the late 1970s it was larger than the GNPs of France and Britain combined.
Original sentence:
Diseased coronary arteries are often surgically bypassed, however half of all bypass grafts fail within ten years.
Correction: Diseased coronary arteries are often surgically bypassed; however, half of all bypass grafts fail within ten years.
Here is a small exercise, it is very simple but you should pay attention on the correction of puncuations as well as the capital letters:
land's End is the southwest tip of the British mainland each year over a million people visit the area just over a mile offshore is the Longships reef this danger to ships is guarded by the Longships lighthouse
2008年9月2日星期二
Assignment 1---topic: why people resist new technology?
References:
Chernobyl disaster. (n.d.) Wikipedia. Retrieved 1 September 2008, from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chernobyl_disaster
2008年8月21日星期四
The idea: engineering solutions must always be designed with economic considerations in mind
In a conclusion, no engineer will ignore the economic aspect when they design and propose the engineering solutions.